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The poem examines the tension between medical detachment, particularly in critical care settings, and familial grief using hyper-specific medical language contrasting against the warmth of the mother and grandmother. The poem also reflects on how quickly life shifts from routine to crisis. The piece adds a humanized perspective of care to literature. In ICUs, patients are often reduced to the systems that fail them. This problem-by-organ-system model is efficient for clinicians but can erode patients’ personhood. The piece hopes to spark discussion about medical systems that may simplify patients to organ systems, particularly in critical care settings.
Status asthmaticus
Mom said you wheezed all your life, sweet and low,
and that morning was like any other:
Lucky Charms at 7:00 —
Except when you coughed it up,
milky brown wads glazed in pink and green,
a chewed-up rainbow and half a pot of gold
Then slid to the ground, silent and slow,
as if accepting surrender,
your head resting on marble tile
While Grandma keened
Sam, Sam, Sam
like it was the only word she knew
As your lungs replied with gasps,
chest with rubbery heaves,
your heart thud to a pause
And started again
but your mind had quieted
no longer playing To Pimp a Butterfly on repeat
Now the ventilator hums in C,
your mouth agape in a hollow note
singing your final song.
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Chai, T.S. Status asthmaticus. Pediatr Res (2025). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41390-025-04177-9
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